I like how you compare a spider to the man that hurt you. Flawless but sad piece. I like the flow, the style and the rhyming. Well done. 5/5, Em

Baby, a love this one, its so real and i really understand it.
a miss you so much!! wish a still spoke and seen you as much!!
love you always saffie no matter how far we are apart or even if you dont wana talk to me a will always be here for you

love you baby girl xxxxxxxxxxx

Saffie
I love the way you used the spiders wed and the spider to represent the ebuser in this poem. This is a piece that really tugs at the heart.

the spiders left me black and blue
by all the things he made me do
now no one believes its true
unless they're caught in his web too

You have used your voice. I believe you. I think there are many people who will relate to this piece. Without even knowing it you may have helped another young girl find her voice to stand up and tell what happened. Keep writing dear Saffie.
~hugs~
Cindy