You covered the colors and senses in such a vivid manner. Lemon drop sun, sounds just wonderful as well as the rest of the things you talked about. Well done.

I really like the description in this piece, it made for a very imaginative read, when it ended though, it didn't feel like it was complete to me, it feels like the beginning of the story. Overall I think you did a nice job here, it was an enjoyable read.

Beautiful descriptions of a colourful world through the minds eye ! An imaginative and enjoyabe read :) Well done.

I loved this so much. And you were worried about this. This was wonderful and I think you used the song title well. You're amazing and don't you doubt it. Nik :)

What I really enjoyed about this piece was your ability to include all the senses and colors in your words, without cramming them together. Only someone as creative as you could come up with this, how your words dance in my eyes right before me! I would also like to mention that the ending was different in a good way. It did not conclude the poem or end it completely but was like the end of the beginning, and the adventures were only starting, you know?

Well done Temps, or should I say Courageous Dreamer!

God bless you and your family!

~MaryAnne

Yesss..I remember so very well your poem, in fact I've read it but I have not commented I don't know why lol.
I love it :) your poems always hold a special style..you're unique :)

Write on~