by Chelsey Oct 22, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
He was driving her home, like he did every night |
You wouldn't believe how often this happens. Before a couple gets married everything is perfect and the guy is sweet and romantic, but as soon as their married he becomes somebody else. I really like this poem and the rhyming and imagery it was well done. The only thing I'd suggest is changing the title of the poem to something a little more catchy.... sometimes people scrolling through poems read the title and it just hooks them :) |