I'M SORRY

by Loveless Dreamer   Oct 22, 2009


Broken, smashed, gone forever,
I no longer feel the weather.
You killed my soul & broke my heart,
the day you said, ~We must part!~
I cried so long, every tear was not alone,
all I wanted, was for you to come home.
I wanted to see you, just one more time,
& hear you say that sweet line.
The line you told me, the day I fell for you,
although I knew it was too good to be true.
You told me you loved me, & I was the only one,
You told me we'd be together forever as you pulled the gun.
You cried you were sorry, but I still couldn't see,
what had gone wrong, that you'd want to leave me.
I walked closer to you, I held you tight,
I told you everything would be alright.
~I love you,~ I whispered, as he held me closer,
~I'm sorry,~ he told me, as he pulled the trigger.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Im not forcing anything

  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Sporry, i couldnt read all this, i was put off by the forcefulness of the rhymes. you need to re think the rhyming scheme,the words your using, etc.to me this isnt your best, but it could be, its there, you just need to chisel away the roughness. stop forcing it.IBE

  • 15 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    I know...thx for being honest. At the time I wrote this I was kinda having writers block.

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