XXxSuicidexXx

by Loveless Dreamer   Oct 22, 2009


The moon is high,
and I'm about to die.
I'm about to slip away into the night,
while no one is in sight.
I have been thinking about this for a long time,
I have been flipping a dime.
Choosing which way to die,
then i sigh,
and start to cry.

I pick up the knife,
and start to slice.

I slice right.

I slice left.

I slice up and down.

I stop and stare,
at what I've done.
I stop and stare,
at the blood,
as it falls to the rug.

I start to get dizzy,
and start to see red.
I fall back onto my bed.
I know I'm about to die,
so all I can do is cry.
Then I fall into a sleep,
a sleep, I will never wake up from.....

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  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Im not too keen on this..there are far too many forced rhymes which almost made me stop reading. then i got to a bit of free verse which was nice but only lasted 2/3 lines then it was back to forced rhyming. the structure is there, the right words are there but you need to mix in some free verse with the harshness of the forced ones and i think, then, it will be less noticing.IBE

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I must admit joy that you have failed as much as I feel sorrow that you have the desire

    But you wrote what you feel and shared some pain with an excellent delivery

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