Very nice Haiku. It is as though the trees shed their clothes. Wonderful write. |
by OHgreenman
Haiku's are my favorite form and you penned an excellent one here!! Can vision the leaves and naked trees. Great job!! |
by John Long
Excellent haiku, the suggestion of sensuality is very clever. |
by Natalie84
Again, in Florida this is not something we experience. I took a trip to Georgia a couple of years ago and the ride there and home honestly put me in amazement...fall must be the more beautiful time of year...nice write! The style (being that it's so short) didn't leave me wanting more or feeling as though I was left hanging...I could imagine what you were seeing. Your poems are reminding me of so many things HAHAHA Sorry to be rambling./ |