Very nice. You two make a good team. Difficult to tell the lines apart. Sad memories and questions about the past and future, lots of whys. Well done to both of you.

"Now we crumble like sand castles...
we never stood a chance against the waves of love."
^ Great lines the both of you..

This was packed full of emotion. Interesting write, you two are wonderful poets, nice to see you trying a collab together. Wonderful job.

Each verse is beautifull penned with so much
feelings immeresed in it..good job!