I like poems that come from the heart for that is where the true emotion is found in its purest raw feeling. and you did an awsome job of potraying that nice job
Raindrop 5/5

I like poems that come from the heart for that is where the true emotion is found in its purest raw feeling. and you did an awsome job of potraying that nice job
Raindrop 5/5

This was cute but I know you can do better. You have a simple say of writer and I feel like you are using that as your safety net. I'd really love to see you break out of yuor shell and write a free verse poem or something totally new. I want you to work on your diction as well. Your imagey would be so much better if you did and you'd be able to give your poems that depth they have been missing. I want yuo to write something that will blow me away. Keep writing hun. Nik