Its really sad how people have an affect on ones personality. No one should be told WHO they are or WHAT they're made of...we all decide that for ourself, and if someone has an influence on you to make you confused about who you are, you need to steer away from that person and find yourself....

Good write!! I enjoyed

Don't worry kiddo your the judge of yourself, ive learned that after a lot of cruel breaks ups and stuff its not always you. all you can do is decide who you want to be, thats how i found myself and my poetry just came naturally afterwords.

this piece is good, the flow needs some work right with the rhyming scheme but other then that it pretty decent 4/5

I completely agree with raindrops. You make who you are. You cant let other people tell you who you are or influence you in any way. To get the farthest in life just be yourself. Ive also had to learn that the hard way.

Excellent 5/5