I have a friend like this...

As in he has the same situation going on.
I don't know if the persom causing the pain realizes that that other person is just there to help and they have feelings too.

You captured something in this piece that isn't easy to show.

Although this poem wasn't as strong as your recent ones, it was just at strong if not more so.
I think I'm addicted to your work :P

Keep it up bud!