by Nomad Being Oct 24, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
It always feels so different to see you smile. |
I found your poem well written and well thought out. There is nothing like a good bit of infatuation and it does seem as if you were smitten. Just one thing that i did not like, the way you used U. If one truly is in love or even that smitten, then is it not worthwhile to write the YOU out in full? Otherwise well done |
Very nice |
A very artistic and imaginative presentation ....u..... have there |