Comments : A Thought About You

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A very artistic and imaginative presentation ....u..... have there

  • 14 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Very nice

    "If beauty is angelic,
    I wonder its all about """""U""""" "

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    I found your poem well written and well thought out. There is nothing like a good bit of infatuation and it does seem as if you were smitten. Just one thing that i did not like, the way you used U. If one truly is in love or even that smitten, then is it not worthwhile to write the YOU out in full? Otherwise well done