Downpour of Daydreams.

by Courageous Dreamer   Oct 24, 2009


A downpour of daydreams
bursted from broken seams
of a courageous idealist,
drizzling memories;
compressing them
against my skin.

Dancing in their beauty;
twisting, twirling,wanting
to forget this vacancy
in my heart, carved
by acidic goodbyes.

Confidence streams across
my wandered mind in a
spectrum of colors; blooming
rainbows and smiling stars
sewn by threads of promise.

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  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... this poem is beautiful! I love it and I got really touched by it... And congratulations on the win! It's definitely a favorite of mine! Well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I really love how symbolic your writing is, because when writing is symbolic the reader can really take it there own way and apply it to themselves...nice write...I would love it if you would comment on my stuff^_^

  • 14 years ago

    by Ducky Ramone

    Excellent poem :) 5/5.
    i loved the way you worded everything especially
    Dancing in their beauty;
    twisting, twirling,wanting
    to forget this vacancy
    in my heart, carved
    by acidic goodbyes.

    read some of mine if you like. Ducky

  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Love it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Nevi

    This is an amazing poem! Oh I love it. Its full of emotion and feeling.
    I love the way it touches ones heart. Especially...

    ...to forget this vacancy
    in my hear, carved
    by acidic goodbyes...

    i had a really rough break with some people, and this describes it so well, it burns like acid, a void that is carved by the pain of their absence.....really inspiring. thanks :)

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