A downpour of daydreams, dancing, twirling among them, so vivid. The last verse to me is full of hope and promise. Well done.

A well written hope-filled poem that uniquely displayed inspiration and the message you wanted to get across to your readers. Very uplifting, thanks for that smile Temps!

Good luck with all you are busy with, I am sorry for commenting so late on your new poems!

5/5 from me, a promising piece that is needed int today's world.

God bless you!

~MaryAnne

A downpour of daydreams
bursted from broken seams

I like this image of daydreams raining. This is a very good opening that draws the
reader into your poem.

of a courageous idealist,
drizzling memories;
compressing them
against my skin

Another part that I like. It feels like a passionate bond between dreams & the person...very good!

This went from sad to cheeerful in the most amazing way....indeed we should never give up hope..it is the one thing that keep us strong.

Lovely poem, Temps:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

A beautiful write :) Our daydreams do indeed twist, twirl, dance and light up our mind/days! Loved this! Well done :)

A downpour of daydreams
bursted from broken seams
of a courageous idealist,

^^ the starting captured me... the analogy with rain is superb... so beautifully penned...

to forget this vacancy
in my heart, carved
by acidic goodbyes-

^^ that was touching... goodbyes are never happy but some can leave a scar in our heart... the last line is brilliant...

spectrum of colors; blooming
rainbows and smiling stars
sewn by threads of promise.

^^ another verse with splendid imagery... hopeful and beautiful... lovely lines...

brilliant poem :)

Very nicely done and well penned with perfect words to display your emotion. keep up the nice writes. peace

The title is unique your actually very good writer i like your poetry. lovely i mean where do you come up with this stuff lolz. keep writing 5/5

A very enjoyable and beautiful piece youv'e wriiten here =]

The tittle of the piece attracted me immediatly to this poem and I wasnt dissapointed, excellent job!

You've done it again. I feel another winner here Temps. Very lovely word choice, the imagery is great as well. I love your title too. It's pefect. Another flawless piece from that brillant mind of yours :) Nik

Well deserved win Temps, congrats!

Ingrid

Congrats hun :) I told you this was a winner.

Congrats cookie dough :-)

Wow, Temps congratulations! You are going so far with your poetry and it just is so nice to see that blossom. Good job, I hope you are enjoying your week.

~MaryAnne

Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Congrats Temps :) Great job on this piece.
Love Cindy

Great selection of words and a powerful write. Congratulations on your win, much deserved one.

Really liked this stanza

Dancing in their beauty;
twisting, twirling,wanting
to forget this vacancy
in my heart, carved
by acidic goodbyes.

Great write indeed

all the best and take care

Gorgous fluid imagery, well done.

What a lovely write. I apologize for the late commenting, but i'm glad to have read this. Rainbows, downpour, dreams, u use all these metaphors which makes this poem a haven for the reader's imagination.

5/5

I love it!!
It's perfect.
Has true purpose and heart.

5/5