Aww... wow... beautiful poem!! It's no wonder it's a winner! Congrats :) I love it!

This is an amazing poem! Oh I love it. Its full of emotion and feeling.
I love the way it touches ones heart. Especially...

...to forget this vacancy
in my hear, carved
by acidic goodbyes...

i had a really rough break with some people, and this describes it so well, it burns like acid, a void that is carved by the pain of their absence.....really inspiring. thanks :)

Love it.

Excellent poem :) 5/5.
i loved the way you worded everything especially
Dancing in their beauty;
twisting, twirling,wanting
to forget this vacancy
in my heart, carved
by acidic goodbyes.

read some of mine if you like. Ducky

I really love how symbolic your writing is, because when writing is symbolic the reader can really take it there own way and apply it to themselves...nice write...I would love it if you would comment on my stuff^_^

Wow... this poem is beautiful! I love it and I got really touched by it... And congratulations on the win! It's definitely a favorite of mine! Well done :)