by Matt Oct 25, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Tic toc |
by BlueJay
Too many people understand this piece at various points in their life. In fact I know a few people closer to it now than they should be, I mean than I wish they were. You really described them all too well. Great job of penning your heart out here. And you did an excellent job of using repetition without it being too overwhelming. |
by kimara4955
I love this Hun, what an amazing and natural flow that's consistent throughout the whole poem, you are an amazing writer and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. |
by yogi73
Wow! great poem. I felt the frustration coming throught the words |
by SheenaMarie
Great write 5/5 |
by Biya
WOW - Great work - MATT now you are one of my favorite poets... |