As you read this seems to be about a prisoners escape from prison but I suspect it has a much deeper meaning than that. Gives the reader a chance to think about the choices. Well done.

Thanks, I just used the prison escape as a metaphor. The reader hopefully identifies with being a prisoner, sometimes of our own making, sometimes not, but with the ability to try and break free. The ending is purposefully left ambiguous for the reader to determine if the escape was successful or not, or to just ponder the question left by the ambiguity.

I loved the ending... as you say... it's left for the reader to decide. A short, but captivating write... Very vivid. Extremely well done.

Within this short write you brought across
your message as well as giving the reader
vivid images..well done!

Minimalistic but laden with imagery and metaphor. Your poems are fresh and I've enjoyed reading them, thank you.

I loved the format of this.. it was suspenseful.. each line brought something different and it wasnt necessairly written in one big sentence but rather short choppy sentences packed with meaning. Loved this!