by Countess of Monte Cristo Oct 25, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
It was good seeing you today |
by Em
This is really wonderful & is a cliff hanger but it's a good one lol. The only thing I can think of to improve is the first line of the second stanza the word "shaked" should quite possibly be "shook." Other than that another perfect piece from you. 5/5, Em |
Aww this was just adorable.. haven't we all been in your position before ;) hope all works out great for you!! |
And shook my hand |
by Meena Krish
The man of your dreams...nicely penned, |
by Sylvia
Nice. I think I remember a person that I felt this way about before. You always wish you had taken just a little more with your hair, dressing, etc., Well done. |