Nice write Walah :) Really enjoyed it too.... Ahh, A knight in shining armour is indeed every womans dream. Well written :)

Nice. I think I remember a person that I felt this way about before. You always wish you had taken just a little more with your hair, dressing, etc., Well done.

The man of your dreams...nicely penned,
where emotions & thoughts are weaved into
one..good write.

And shook my hand
I hate unfinished poems guess we will never know the outcome of you tet-a-tet, HA! HA!
The poem though was good and overall it structure was okay though its meter was a little broken definitely not rhyming. a good effort 4/5 Ray S

Aww this was just adorable.. haven't we all been in your position before ;) hope all works out great for you!!

This is really wonderful & is a cliff hanger but it's a good one lol. The only thing I can think of to improve is the first line of the second stanza the word "shaked" should quite possibly be "shook." Other than that another perfect piece from you. 5/5, Em