One Perfect Rose

by Loveless Dreamer   Oct 26, 2009


A single flower sent to me, since the last we met.
Very tender the messenger he had chose.
Pure & deep-hearted, with sweet scented dew still wet.
All it is, was one perfect rose!
I knew this language, of the beautiful flower.
~My fragile leaves~, it said, ~his heart is close.~
Love has long taken from this bright amulet.
Taken as a shape, of one perfect rose.
Why is it so, that no one has sent me one yet?
A perfect limo do you suppose?
No...it's just my luck to get.
This one perfect rose!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Im not keen on the limo line, the rest are great, i like how you are talking about love, a rose..comparisson? this poem deffinatly does NOT need any more line, its fine the way it is, i love your wording and the structure is to be admired as all is forgotton as the reader is entwined with the soul of th epoem. maybe take out that limo line..IBE

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