by Loveless Dreamer Oct 26, 2009
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
A single flower sent to me, since the last we met. |
by Love Panda
Im not keen on the limo line, the rest are great, i like how you are talking about love, a rose..comparisson? this poem deffinatly does NOT need any more line, its fine the way it is, i love your wording and the structure is to be admired as all is forgotton as the reader is entwined with the soul of th epoem. maybe take out that limo line..IBE |