by The Lady of Shalott Oct 26, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
All day long, |
by VeinsofHate
Simply amazing |
by Kurt
Very powerful poem about how just a phone call can change the outcome of things. I thought the flow was steady and the rhyme scheme fit together well enough. |
Wow, i loved this, great flow and rhyme 5/5 |