Wow, i loved this, great flow and rhyme 5/5

Very powerful poem about how just a phone call can change the outcome of things. I thought the flow was steady and the rhyme scheme fit together well enough.

"But she doesn't care,
she can't feel a thing.
She's filling her heart,
with liquid novacaine."

A wonderful depiction of how substance abuse can seem like the right choice to aid in depression while also showing the consequences of what it can do. Very insightful. 5/5.

Simply amazing