Rhyming wasn't so evident in the beginning, but later it broke up the flow slightly. Still, I loved it. 5/5. :)

I love how the ending is just "end". It really tells me something about you. Or the you at the time you wrote the poem. It may not necessary be the same you. There's hope in the poem, but barely. It's monotonous. The same images are thrown at you twice, then it moves on. I like that.