Sanctus Espiritus

by Wishmaster   Oct 27, 2009


We cannot let go
From our deadly scar
But now we've gone too far
We've got to let go

Freedom will never be free
We are slaves to our desires
We are only liars
We are headed to agony

Blood spilled across the wall
Guns ablaze with no end in sight
Souls released into eternal night
Save us before we fall

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  • 14 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    We are slaves to our desires

    So true.

  • 14 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Short and sweet RIGHT TO THE POINT! I liked it dude!! ^-^

  • 15 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Yes i agree the title is what caught me and your words are sad but true freedom will never be free and we are paying to high a price for it but you did a great job

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    I must say a very captivating title, well atleast for me...I noticed that the syllabic count was prety consistent as well the rhyme scheme...The message behind this piece was somehow intruguing and stimulating...

    Keep writing..:-)

  • 15 years ago

    by Wishmaster

    This is about how we need to end war, we cannot keep fighting in order to survive

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