This is about how we need to end war, we cannot keep fighting in order to survive

I must say a very captivating title, well atleast for me...I noticed that the syllabic count was prety consistent as well the rhyme scheme...The message behind this piece was somehow intruguing and stimulating...

Keep writing..:-)

Yes i agree the title is what caught me and your words are sad but true freedom will never be free and we are paying to high a price for it but you did a great job

Short and sweet RIGHT TO THE POINT! I liked it dude!! ^-^

We are slaves to our desires

So true.