Very nice work on this collab, gentlemen...seemless, sad and well penned:)

God bless:)

5/5 Ingrid

Kept me reading, wanting more the whole time. Much like a good song. Great job!

This poems really touches me. So truthful, yet sad indeed. I don't understand why some people take it a pleasure to down vote great poems of others, anyway for me it is a well written piece. 5/5, kel.