Comments : Toxic love

  • 15 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    Awts another sad poem.. i like sad poem i can relate always.. every stanza is perfect.. the emotion of powerful pain expressing in your words. keep it up.
    -nightsan

  • 14 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    I do really liek this poem
    but only criticism would be in this stanza

    "I looked into your
    eyes there full of
    sadness.Just take
    a look in my mind
    its filled with madness."

    should there be they're?

    and

    in this stanza

    "I love you with
    all me heart even after
    you tore it apart."

    I think me should be my

    not sure as to how exactly you may of indended that but i just thought i'd tell you