by bob Oct 27, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
When I was a boy I dreamt almost every night |
by XxLastHopexX
As one gets older you see that the dreams you had during your childhood were exactly that....childish dreams...then when your old enough reality hits you...and it hurts....you portrayed that in this poem...well written. |
Sad... but beautiful written. |
by kaylajoyx3
Whoa. This describes perfectly the wants of people and how they change in time.. The ending was a surprise and a little saddening. sometimes there are things we just can not change. We have to accept that the world is not ours to manipulate and control.. good job!- kayla |
A short but nice piece, I like the progression of each stanza through the ages. Nice job. |