A short but nice piece, I like the progression of each stanza through the ages. Nice job.

Whoa. This describes perfectly the wants of people and how they change in time.. The ending was a surprise and a little saddening. sometimes there are things we just can not change. We have to accept that the world is not ours to manipulate and control.. good job!- kayla

Sad... but beautiful written.

As one gets older you see that the dreams you had during your childhood were exactly that....childish dreams...then when your old enough reality hits you...and it hurts....you portrayed that in this poem...well written.