by Kurt
Wow, that is incredibly deep. At first I thought the repetition of certain words was having a negative effect on the poem. However, after I read it a second time, they seemed to add sincerity to the writing. Almost as if to show the human side of the author, to make it less exact; more relatable. Well written 5/5 for sure. |
by Nobodys Hero
The poem itself is well written, the rhyming scheme was spot on and the flow worked perfectly. |
by Dark Savior
Thanks hero. It's something I've not done for some time. It's good to check back and see how these work. |