Oohhhh this is a sad situation indeed. :(. I liked your poem, rhyme shceme was good and kept me till the end nice work^^>

This was so sad. i really loved it! i felt complete pain as i read this. but not in a bad way, at all. i really admire how you put so much thought and feeling into this. i bet it wasn't easy. great job and chin up :) please read my new ones "change" and "scars"?