Sweet Melody

by No1ButMe   Oct 29, 2009


I felt the cold sting
The sharpness seeping into my skin
My blood warming with each touch
Your hand wraps around my waist
Pulling me in closer to you
I feel the heat of your breath
As my neck becomes moist
I twinge at the thought,
But my hands hold no fight
As my frail body touches yours
My body weakens and I go numb
Cold as ice as you take over my soul
I can feel my faint heart beat
Boom... boom... boom
My eyes close to the sweet melody

*not sure if i'm finished with it*

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    This was written and worded well..I loved the intense feeling from the beginning..However, i dunno if i should like how you ended it..Probably the last line was not that powerful but on the contrary, i think you purposely did it for an extra imagination..

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