Blind for your love

by Samuel Dimafelix   Oct 30, 2009


Im hurtin inside
all the tears i can't hide
its hard to live without you by my side
but you leave me here out of sight

I want you to know what im feeling
do you know that im suffering?
Because I LOVE YOU so much and its hard to deny
i have to treat you as a friend,
i can't stop to cry

i love you, i love you so much
all the things ive done for you seems not enough
i know that you wouldnt be happy beside me
so my love for you, i have to set it free

you wished our friendship should be save
but its hard to do it, so hard to forget
as of now its hard to pretend
i should be starting now but its the end

Those words i can still remind,
for the long time, i was blind
I didnt see that im nothing to you
Yes i accept that you dont love me too

I am blind for you love
i thought you love me
eventhough im not
still im hoping, praying
but all this im tired ofloving

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Very sad but written well. 5/5, Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Spirit

    Captialize your (I's) please. I thought that you were trying to have a reason in your poem for not having capitialized (I's) but then I noticed that some were capitalized and it confused me.

    Also if you wish to rhyme in a poem try keeping the same rhyme scheme throughtout.

    Other than that I could see the potential in this poem.

    So keep up the good work and live with a pencil in your hand.

    >-Spirit->

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