by Samuel Dimafelix Oct 30, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Yesterday.. |
by Love Panda
Love the set up of this poem, - yesterday, today and tomorrow - i love it. the words are a little corse but i understood what you meant. nice 1! IBE |
It is just nirvana , pick a random one , and make up her in your rainbow mind , with the past thoughts , undress the lies , and past a little blaste of joy 5/5 |
Simple, sad yet so nicely written. |
by Kristina
This poem is very deep and that's what I like about it. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it, so that makes this poem excellent! It also flowed really nicely. Please keep on writing, you have talent! 5/5 |
by Em
It's amazing how on a daily basis our life, love or something else changes. Beautifully written and a good choice of words. 5/5, Em |