It may have seemed easy as you wrote those repetitive stanzas down yet there is definitely an art to getting them right or the poem ends up in your case half excellent / good. As you have concentrated on the subject in the case of repetition the secret is to keep the readers attention and interest in your words, so you have made two cardinal sins first if you are going to repeat the first line in each stanza the lines following should take the readers mind of that fact and second it should not be so long.
Love using repetitious lines always seems to fail as it has in your poem that is probably why I am the first commenter seems a shame really as if you have just written this for one person he I am sure would appreciate your love. 4/5 Ray S

I love those words, the one, i remember when i thought i found the one but now i dont believe anyone should limit themselves to one nice poem btw.^^

This actually made me cry.. just cause i know exactly how you feel.. and i had someone like that.. and idk haha.. but anyway once again, you showed such great emotion.. and it was really enjoyable to read. you are a talented writer and have so much potential. well done once again.

5/5 :)

This actually made me cry.. just cause i know exactly how you feel.. and i had someone like that.. and idk haha.. but anyway once again, you showed such great emotion.. and it was really enjoyable to read. you are a talented writer and have so much potential. well done once again.

5/5 :)

Most people don't like the repetative format because they think its easy and makes the poem worth less because of it. I on the other hand really like the style and you did it well. If you read the work properly the way its supposed to be read in the writers eyes it flows great and has good imagery. All people can relate to the topic and thats what you want as a writer.... great work 5/5

Its a nice written poem!
I noticed the way you wrote your poem, you repeated each 1st sentence in each stanza!

nice way, its like you combined quotes together to make a poem! nice was of writting... creative !!! :)

keep it up!

This poem was actually sweet, it meant so much, not just to me, but everyone, very good job, 5/5

and i returned the favor lol
thanks anyways

This romantic poem has flowed so freely from you heart it is beautiful

This is so beautiful, passionate & romantic. You express lots of feeling & emotion & show how you truly feel about your love & how precious it means to you.

I liked this poem alot. Like the other girl was saying, some people would not like the repetitive words throughout the whole poem. But I, on the other hand, thought it added a little something to the piece and I thought it was charming. Again, on this poem, you did a great job expressing how you feel and explaining the true enjoyment of love :)

You are the one, My one and only,
The one who makes me feel alive,
The one that I need to be with forever.

^Very nice ending. It was a good way to close off your story :)

Very nice piece, once again. I highly enjoyed the detail and the love wordings. Don't stop writing!

5/5

It pains me to say it, but i think that your writing style is just bland. I dont really like it. The reptition throughout it just drug on and took away from the poem. So i give this a 3/5