by kelleyana Oct 31, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
As my dancing feet hit the floor, my eyes were trapped...fixed on the god of a male,who shines a sure smile at me. Appealing to my eyes from the vibes he radiates, sending visual cues that i'm the most weak in the game of seduction, obviously thinks he's the active party but infact is in bondage to seduit in slavery. |
by Richard S
The Tango is not just a dance but a game of seduction. You have captured it well. |
I think what makes the tango so amazing is that its one of the few dances you can't fake. It takes every part of you to make it beautiful and romantic, just like writing. You can't do it with minimal effort or without your heart or it just isn't the same. This is a great piece and very unique I'm glad I read it 5/5 |
by Lady Nik
Wow :) what a lovely poem this was. I love the imagery, it's very strong throughout the piece. A very wonderful poem dear. Keep it up. Nik |
This was a great write and wonderful to read you really did capture the passion and sexyness of this dance it is a true art of simply human bodies woven together and you captured it all too well great job |
Great imagery and flow in this novel approach |