Arouse the desire hidden deep within,
within my lonely soul, waiting for you to light the fire

^^

Your words hit so close to home..

Don't all lonely people yearn to have this, a love that fills our heart and soul?

Very well done on this Loop format, I like Loop poetry very much.

God bless:)

5/5 Ingrid

This was wonderful, very nicely done. Reminds me of Mel's poem that I just read, they are kind of similar in a way. Well done.

Very unique format for me. You really have a great talent and could easily play around with words. Really liked it.

all the best and take care

An awesome poem. Loved it Sylvia. The passion, desire , longing can be felt. You have crafted this piece so well... and did a wonderful job with the loop poetry! Love it :) Well done.

You did a fantastic job with that format as well as of sharing your thoughts... I just loved how it rolled off my tongue when I read it out loud..Well done Sylvia..:-)

This is the best Loop poetry I've read and
I mean it! It flowed so perfectly with passion
& love. Well done!!

Sylvia this is absolutely fantastic. No matter what styles of poems you wrote, it's just amazing. I think it's the first time i've seen this style of poem. I like it very much and your words scream love. Very well done, kel.

To love someone and have that peson return that love is the most exhilerating feeling there is.
That's what my take is on this beautiful piece.
We all need to experience this warmth and loving feeling.
Good job on this piece Sylvia.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Very well done Sylvia. Sensuous and sweet.
And thank you for your comments on my poem about my mother. I appreciate your staying in touch. Hope all is well with you.
Corinne

:) I love your cool poems! I can't do them so I light up like a christmas tree when I read yours. You're like the master of different poetry styles. I'm so jealous. This was a short one but the emotions displayed were huge! I got such a warm and fuzzy feeling from this. I was cold so I had to read it a few times to stay warm lol. This poem really shows people how gifted you are as a poet. Lovely work dear. Glad you asked me to read this one. Nik

Nice poem I love loop poetry they are easy
to write I just love your poem it was good.