Forever

by Forever Yours   Nov 1, 2009


In the beginning,
It was a wonderful thing.
New places and new experiences.

The life you knew was the most beautiful sight for your troubled eyes.
In the darkness, there was always a light,
To guide you back to those you loved.

The sights and thoughts became overwhelming,
And so, it wasn't worth it anymore.
You were suddenly gone, never to return.

Our tears shed were for you,
For your memory, for your place in our hearts,
They were shed only because your absence was too hard to imagine.

In the end,
It was too much, and nothing seemed good or right anymore.
We loved you, and we wish you could have seen that.

But even though our hearts are breaking,
And our memories are so vivid that they haunt us,
We will always remember you, and the impact you had in our lives,

Forever.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Andrew

    Beautiful Poem I love the word FOREVER with a passion i try to stress its importance in all my poems and how you did it was good also i love the wordings you used to express your emotions one of my favorite part from this poem was:
    (The life you knew was the most beautiful sight for your troubled eyes.
    In the darkness, there was always a light,
    To guide you back to those you loved.)

    But anyways I hope to read more of your work. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is so beautiful..you kinda said it all on how it feels when a loved ones leaves you behind..for whatever reason that may be.

    Because of the way it is kept small, it has such a deep impact..I read in your profile how old you are and somehow that makes this piece even more powerful. People often don't realize just how much grief they cause when they leave ( intentionally), especially with young people.

    You get my vote as well!

    God bless:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I think sadly many of us can relate to this piece on a lot of different levels. I enjoyed it, you vented without being crass, which can sometimes be hard to do. keep up the good work, very touching.

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