Promises

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Nov 1, 2009


Promises are just trinkets of deception ,
cleverly crafted with no hidden exceptions.
Love a mere interlude, inflamed fascination,
attraction seldom more then sweet temptation.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Amazing. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Short but to the point.

    Good job!

    • 12 years ago

      by TJ Arizona Eagle

      Thanks and sorry for the late reply been out of town

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I totally agree :)

  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was amazing. It's is a true writer who can have such an emotional impact in such a short stanza. I would love it if you could check out some of my new writes...i am interested to know what you think :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Roronoa Zoro

    Short and sweet yet very true good job