A Note

by HURRiCANESky   Nov 2, 2009


I know you wrote the note
and I knew it was for her.
But I put it in my pocket
and later in my room.
I put it in a secret place
for someone, someday to see.
In hopes that someone
would then find it,
and think that someone loved me...

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  • 10 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    The detail of this poem was well written.
    You allowed the reader to understand what this note consisted.
    A strong flow from beginning to end.
    Although this poem is a somber subject with lost feelings you somehow place beauty and grace within it too, which is sometimes tough when writing a sad poem.
    Keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Wow this is really good!! i love it! 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    I know this was a sad poem, but I found it absolutely adorable. You found a way to explain this note, which I assume to be a note of betrayal to an affair, and you've turned something bitter into something bittersweet is the way I can describe it.

    The flow was natural, and the word sequence was in place, almost as if it could be normal speech which is something I found amazingly put. Well Done, and keep on writing (:

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