Whisper Lies To Me

by Steady Stereotype   Nov 2, 2009


Enchanting branches reaching tethered arms,
Coaxing personnas with flamboyant charms,
Faint whispers lie in the wind,
Snapshot photo, barest pink tinge.

Soft grass dewed with salted tears,
Blanketing roots block out the fears.
Soft moon glows, eclipsing the sun;
One last embrace, with no where to run.

Sinking through quicksand soil,
Sun's hot glare from reality coil.
Whisper breezy tornadoes to my ear,
Beneath the wispy willow no voice to hear.

Blindfold the vision, and play music through my soul,
Floating to the root bed, never mind the hole.
The fluffy lies embedded to the sky,
A quenching pretense, down Wispy Willow to lie.

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  • 14 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Creative and original !
    i like it

  • 14 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    Soft grass dewed with salted tears,
    Blanketing roots block out the fears.

    these 2 lines completes the poem....
    its perfect......

  • 14 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    First two verses or wtvr-beautiful.feels as tho someone could safely lose themselves in a forest of emotion without losing control of reality.not bad

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    You have written a spectacular piece that is well beyond your years and shows the most important quality to me in a person, potential.
    It proves that your work will get better and stronger the more you write over the years and thats something to be proud of. The imagery and the word flow are amazing, I love the fact you chose to rhyme this piece and do it well enough to keep the complexity of your poem and not ruin it. "soft grass dewed with salted tears" I thought that line was absolutely amazing. I just pictured someone so upset and heart broken crying and crying without stopping as if they were the reason for the dew. Excellent job 5/5 fantastic write.

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Wow. Sort of caught me off guard. Your choice of vocabulary was amazing. Im not sure what else I can say other than that this is one of the best poems I have read in a couple of weeks. <--- Honesty. Great job.
    5/5

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