Wow very dreamy and sad and beautiful.

I really loved your descriptions in this!! great job!!! would you please read and give your comments on my last two poems i wrote today?? it would mean so much to me!

Wow. Sort of caught me off guard. Your choice of vocabulary was amazing. Im not sure what else I can say other than that this is one of the best poems I have read in a couple of weeks. <--- Honesty. Great job.
5/5

You have written a spectacular piece that is well beyond your years and shows the most important quality to me in a person, potential.
It proves that your work will get better and stronger the more you write over the years and thats something to be proud of. The imagery and the word flow are amazing, I love the fact you chose to rhyme this piece and do it well enough to keep the complexity of your poem and not ruin it. "soft grass dewed with salted tears" I thought that line was absolutely amazing. I just pictured someone so upset and heart broken crying and crying without stopping as if they were the reason for the dew. Excellent job 5/5 fantastic write.

First two verses or wtvr-beautiful.feels as tho someone could safely lose themselves in a forest of emotion without losing control of reality.not bad

Soft grass dewed with salted tears,
Blanketing roots block out the fears.

these 2 lines completes the poem....
its perfect......

Creative and original !
i like it