Comments : How I Died

  • 13 years ago

    by Gness

    This is a underated poem you might want to try spacing though unless there is a reason for one paragraph otherwise very nicely described.

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is fantastic!! This is amazing!! It is the best I have seen of yours so far (I still have many more though) Oh my gosh this is s well written. Though its so sad, it is wonderful

  • 13 years ago

    by LockedAway

    Thanks