I can feel the loneliness behind these words
and the hurt of a love that has left..it leaves
the reader lingering with sadness. A touching
write..take care.

Sometimes an event or person takes away the star within us and we do lose that shine and it can be turned around in that the person you love leaves and that star is not twinkling anymore. Well done.

Ladies never lose the shine with out you guys like me are lost :)
Good poem nice word choices. It hit on so many emotions, not just sadness. Excellent