This is a very powerful poem and it tells of ur story sad and true for so many girl have to face this everyday not just u and I know u will b ok and hope u get the help u need to get past this and I know it will not b easy 5/5

Tammi,

With a smile i pretended to be somebody else.
But its at the stage im losing hope,
Im giving up, i cant seem to cope.

no comment cause it was a poem and comment it self , 5/5

Wow!! i didn't know you were going through this love :( it's a great poem, one of your best i'd say, but so sad to read coz i care about you so much. i love the flow and great word choice, i hope you can get better and want to do it for yourself, because you are a great girl and i want you to heal :) 5/5 because it's so relatable and so well written
take care xxxx

But you all listen, but you dont hear,
And you may watch, but you dont see,
So im going to make it very clear....
I HAVE DEPRESSION AND ITS KILLING ME.

This is the best part in the whole poem the flow was way perfect and it gets a 5/5

Wow, that was sad hon. good job though. 5/5 always. best writer. ox love you. stay strong.

This was a very strong poem... The flow was great & your wording was done quite well it was a little of beat in a few places but if red in a certain flow it didnt show too much.
I really enjoyed it.

wishing you the best hun xx

Wow, i loved this! I can relate, depression is hard to go through. Great poem, well written. great job.
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