Aww. . . I wanted to cry but i guess that means you did your job well it was really moving and alot of peopl can relate to this kind of pain so that just adds to your skill i myself can relate i love it 5/5

Aww. . . I wanted to cry but i guess that means you did your job well it was really moving and alot of peopl can relate to this kind of pain so that just adds to your skill i myself can relate i love it 5/5

This is a wonderful but saddening true piece. It's not nice when people fall out of love but sometimes it's for the best. I know what you're going through. 5/5, Em

Aw :( This is amazing. I had to go through this exact situation. The emotion in your writing leaves me speechless.. Once again great job.

"I fought a war that was not mine" I really feel that, very powerful line. Great work. I hope everything is better for you, or on the way to getting better.

A very emotional poem. Good job. Though extreamly sad. (ignore spelling please)