Without Explanation;;

by Brenda   Nov 4, 2009


This hole must be here for a reason.
people don't just stumble across hurt.
my tears must reflect your mistakes.
for people don't just say certain words. . .
next time; I'll be sure to read the signs.
&& follow the correct road.
never again will my heart take a detour.
or will it break from mixed signals.'

this hole must be here for a reason.
a heart doesn't just break . . .
;; without explanation.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Also, I forgot to mention, there are a couple places where there are random punctuation marks that don't fit. Just wanted to let you know, thanks!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A powerful poem, written in short but meaningful words that expressed your thoughts. A enjoyable yet sad piece to read, thanks for sharing.

    God bless you and Merry Christmas!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I know how this feels and the way you described it is beautiful but still sad. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    So my computer is stupid... sorry about the extra comments. But I was going to say that I can relate to this poem a lot. I know what it feels like to have this happen and I think you did a wonderful job of explaining how you feel. Your imagery really makes this a deep and emotional piece. Nice to read from you. :) Oh to remove my extra comment just hit the remove button and tell them I posted a comment twice. My bad hun. But good poem. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was really sad :(

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