Wow. pure amazing

lovely write!

definetly a tru master piece

Very well written and I could see a framed
picture hanging on the wall which speak
voulmes..good write!

Awesome... just awesome you too! Beautiful flow, rhyme in this piece and words that just create vivid images :) Loved it! Very well done to you both :)) Lol.

Very nice, you two did a wonderful job on this collab. Really cannot tell who wrote what. If we could only suspend the past and live for the present and future. Well done.

Wow! What a powerhouse collab this was. You two should be very proud because this was brillant. I love the first stanza. You two did a great job with this. It seems so whole and flows very nicely. Nik :)