by SolemnWish
I really liked this poem especially the last two lines of the 3rd stanza |
I really liked this poem, the flow was great and so was the rhyme. great job 5/5 |
by Faithless
I guess you were in a state of confusion when you wrote this; questioning your faith and what you have been told to believe. Well, at a certain point of life, there are lots of things that we tend to ask our self. But the only way to enlighten our self is to seek a quest for the truth until we are satisfied with the answers that we're looking for. No doubt, i like how you penned this poem of yours, just airing out your thoughts and put it into words. |