by Of Sweet Insanity Nov 7, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Topaz eyes with rusty glass shards. |
by SolemnWish
She took his pain and his will with it too. |
by SheenaMarie
Superb write 10/5 |
I can't even begin to write how amazing this was.. |
You did an amazing job and creating rhyme and a flow i could dance too. =) Great Job! |
by Kuro
Bravo! every stanza was rhymed brilliantly and the flow was flawless. and to top it all off, you used excellent vocabulary. none of the rhymes seemed forced. everything just fit together so perfectly. |